FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kazmo - Sinking In]

Man You asshole I could do a lot better!

Lol. Just kidding there no I couldnt xD

I LOVE THIS SONG. The way you repeat that beginning synth over and over again and it never gets old. Then you made the same synth into different sounds and different textures and dammmnnn. That piano and soothing bass made this a freaking kick ass listen. It really had a nice dance groove to it. I loved the glitching you did at 2:40. Your are the king of trance! Make your own albulm and sell it for thousands! HOLY MOLY! Can I have 5% of profit for telling you to do that? :D :D :D :o

[Kazmo - Forever Today RMX]

Long Live Tiesto! :)

Tiesto is a bit to commercial now adays, but i still enjoy his mixes. This was a great remix! I could really feel that beat. I am thinking of using this for the upcoming senior prom... we are having a techno themed prom and its gonna be sweet. *one long trance song ever 5 songs* Anyway, im gonna throw this gem at the music committee and see what they have to say.

GREATS:

Repetetion should only be repetitive if the synth is cacyh, just repeating a beat over and over again gets quite obnoxious. Howeverm you managed to cut off the beat just at the right moment and switch to the classic tiesto build up that ended with of course the beat coming back again with that catchy and addicting synth! WELL DONE!

I could really feel the dance beat to this. I wanted to get up and whipe out some glow sticks. At 4:34 you included another layer of sounds and thats what really got me shaking. Very good buildup skills.

GOODS:

The sounds were very pelasing to the ears. Only a few were slightly annoying, but only a FEW. *some cracks and other organic noises inside the beats*

IMPROVEMENTS: If you want to really experiment with remixing, then you should add a large solo that you created yourself with the main sound the song uses. Like that dudududududud thing that you hear throughout the whole song could easily have another layer of a kickass home made synth you made yourself, adding a completley different and original tune or something to the song while still maintaing that Tiesto beat in the background. Then that would throw some nice variety in your remix.

Although, I am sure you wanted to keep that Tiesto influence by not having TO much variety in there, since Tiesto rarely has a large variety of synths in his songs. Thats just the way he remixes.

Great job! Your sir have talent.

[(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin]

Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :X

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 88

Wow. Just like, holy shit. I expected a good submission from you and I see this wasnt a good submission... it was a fantastic submission. Each and every character was acted very very well, and you have about 8 of them. I LOVED the background voices. You are very good with making boy and girl voices. The acting of the main character was hilarious. The hippy cafe goer, terribly awesome. The guys on TV, just fabulous. The jokes, lolable. It wasnt to long and it wasnt to short. The ending could have been a bit less adruptive, but it still was great. You need to go ask people if they need any voice acting because you would be a GREAT addition to the voice acting world. You have loads of talent and this is my favorite submission. Great job, just wow. I expect great things from you. -95

EDDACHE SAYS:

rednikaiaG
va4C 2nd muffin

Acting = 35
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

98

Comments
Excellent voice acting. Really superb. The voices fit so well and it's a great display of your range. The sfx were too loud in places which smothered the voices a bit but I loved the use of bg voices during the café scenes, people not involved with the main characters at all but really help populate the scene. The TV section felt a little bit of a cop-out, but what you did with it was really well performed and an original method of using the word, "muffin". It's a double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

rednikaiaG
(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin
Acting 28/35
Fit 20/25
Originality 12/15
Range 8/10
Mixing 9/10

- 77

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Rednikaiag
VA4 second Muffins-
Acting - 30/35
Fit - 21/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 13/15
Mixing - 10/10
84

A pure gold performance with hilarious characters and a VERY convincingly mixed scene! Improvements? MAKE MOAR!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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rednikaiaG responds:

FatKid - 95/100:---------->
You will be greatly missed round these here parts, Man. Hey, I FINALLY got noted for making girl AND boy voices! Ha! I know in the first competition, everyone just kept saying, "you DON'T even sound like a guy". *wonders if any of you guys must think I actually have a penis or something, in order to pull that one off* The compliments you left, are just, magnificent. Thanks so much for always being a huge help and being open with your advice. I hope to one day, have as many VA roles as you, yourself have taken part in. You little voice actin' weasel, you! Heh heh heh Oh, not to mention both of our first flashes were for Halloween. Whoopty-Doo! :) Thanks for the prize and putting these together, FK!!

Eddache - 98/100:
Holy Smoked Sausages, EddMan---------->
Coming from YOU, this means more than you'll ever know. I mean a high score is a high score but YOU gave it to me. Thank you Sir, thank you. Now that you and STAG-film are teamed up in projects together, you two are gonna rule the Newgrounds World! Ha! So, if you guys ever need a secretary to keep up with what all regions you dominate already, you KNOW where to find me. :)
I know the sound FX were a bit loud in spots. This was, once again a last minute deadline entry. I'm HORRIBLE at that, being prompt, I mean. *sighs* I've tweaked my mic a bit more now so I SHOULDN'T need a LOT of BG noises anyway, now. I'm hoping anyway. The T.V. section was my favorite part to do. I'm glad you got a kick out of it, Man, honestly. Oh, and that "double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream" is comin' right up. Do you take soy or milk, Sire?
Congrats on the last go around, Meestah Eddache.
*bows down at your NG greatness*

ForNoReason - 77/100:---------->
You crazy, silly soundboard makin' man, you! Thanks for judging the competition and doing so honestly. I really thought you were gonna enter this time around. Hopefully this won't be the last one. It's always so much fun to hear what everyone comes up with. It's a really unique idea, I think. Well, here's to wishing luck on keeping this thing going. If there's ANYthing I can do to help, don't hesitate to ask me. I mean it, Ok? I'd be honored. Thanks again for judging and bringing so many voices here to NG, that make us all smile! :)

STAG-a-zine rack - 84/100---------->
Do I really even need to put this into words? Don't you know already JUST how much pain, I'm in without you in my ears anymore? *pops my arm to plumpen it up, wanting another shot of your sweet beaver goodness, directly in my veins* Ah dear Gawd, how long HAS it been, eh? You and your busy life. I barely get to see you anymore (unless I'm watching you from underneath your bed, I mean. The view's all skewed from there though.) I miss hearing your voice, tickling my cochlea. How's that famed jungle making bro of your doing? I miss ya. I need ya. I gotta chat wiff ye. I need release. Thank you, inifinitely, Staggy Poo. Your opinion will forever be important to me. You are the most talented man I know. Thanks for sharing your gifts with everyone. Go ahead now, cool down your face with a damp rag. You're blushing from absolute embarassment. I apologize. I ramble. I know. I love you.

.................Take care, be good and compete.period
<3:(Gaia:)

[Snively's Dirty Duty]

Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :L

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 85

LOL. First off, I would like to say that the acting was fantastic. There were very few errors and the characters actually sounded like the ones from the cartoon. That laugh by the chicken robot guy at the end sounded EXACTLY like he does in the cartoon. I could picture the characters very well and laughed at the originality of this piece. You need to go to the nearest music store and buy a nice AT2020 microphone. Or just a good mic. I could tell the mic you used wasnt a very good quality, but you still managed to alter the sound to make it sound good quality so good job on that. I wish that you would have made sound effects of guts falling to the floor when Snigglet was sewing up Sonic, and maybe you could have made the skit a bit more lively by putting in some small background music, but other than that it was fantastic! Great job! - 89

EDDACHE SAYS:

AMTRAX91
Snively's Dirty Duty

Acting = 33
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

-97

Comments
Ah yes, The Adventure Of Sonic. Grand memories. It's been a while since I've seen an episode so I can't say how accurate the voices are to the show but regardless: The voice of Snively was absolutely excellent and hilarious. Robotnik was great when in shouty mode, but it slipped in places. There were a few unfortunate pauses in places and it dragged during the taxidermy scene which really hurt the pacing (You're ToOOoo Sloooow! - sorry, couldn't resist!). Also the piece was a little too quiet, but overall, it was excellent work!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting 30/35
Fit 18/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/15
Mixing 6/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

AMTRAX91:
Snively's Dirty Duty
Acting - 27/35
Fit - 22/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 15/15
Mixing - 10/10

-84

although lagging in events in some parts you performed with fantastic diction and very fun personalities

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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AMTRAX91 responds:

THAAAAANK YOOOOUUUUUU!!!!

[Jones Family VA Contest Entry]

Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71

First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86

EDDACHE SAYS:

Jessismith
Jones Family

Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7

- 82

Comments
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Acting 18/35
Fit 15/25
Originality 12/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 6/10

- 58

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

- 60

The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Jessismith responds:

Yay! Thanks fatkid! And thanks to all the rest of you wonderful judges. You rule! :D

[Keepers Of Hell]

Final REsults For Voice Acting Contest! :P

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 63

Personally, I loved LOVED this. Why? Well, because of the strange mixing that you did where you can barely hear the voices of the characters, and the mix of the strangSo 10 for originallity, but 5 for acting. The guy who woke up didn't sound like he was to freaked out when he said "oh my god". He just said it so forcefully. Plus, the characters talked a bit to dull. They didnt sound like they were really talking, rather that they were being forced to talked by some director. In other words, your forcing your voices to much. Try to think like YOu are the character so that YOU just simple talk like him and like you are really there. the mixing was bad because i couldnt hear the characters to well, make sure to lower the volume on the layer where the music is by about 30%. By the way, that ending where you purposely blew into the microphone and said lalal was just fabulous for the muffin ending. I loved it. -80

EDDACHE SAYS:

Kirbyfemur
Keepers Of Hell

Acting = 15
Fit = 20
Originality = 13
Range = 10
Mixing = 5

63

Comments
The acting was ok, but it was very difficult to understand what the characters were saying. The use of music and sfx was good but at the beginning it was smothering the voices so much it made it even more difficult to hear the characters. I had bit of a hard time understanding what was going on but it was quite an original tale. The voices did fit quite well but it was let down a lot by the lack of clarity.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Kirbyfemur:
Keepers OF Hell
Acting 21/35
Fit 13/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/10
Mixing 4/10

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Kirbyfemur:
Keepers of hell
Acting -11/35
Fit - 14/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 8/15
Mixing - 8/10
A very cute performance with charm and light humour. However, I barely even felt any real emotion or expression...

- 51

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Kirbyfemur responds:

I guess next time i'll have to make sure not to record so late at night lol

Thank you for the review, and for letting me enter. =3

[Out Of Control TV Programmes]

Final Voice Acting Contest Results! :3

IMPORTANT: Disqualified for being under 2 minutes long! The minimum requirement was 2 minutes long. Its not fair for it to be so short because it gets rated higher, because there is less to rate. Its like saying one line very well and getting 35/35 for acting, but someone who has 4 lines says two of those lines badly and gets 17/35. I am very sorry and hope that you understand. Also, you were supposed to talk about someone working in their jobs. I see that it was about someone tired of working for such a crappy TV station, but you should have started it out with him coming to work and slowly growing insane over the horrible programs coming on. This way you would have made it to at least 3 minutes long and have it a story that could be altered into this random style you have going.

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 75

You have a very funny range of voices. A lot of them sound similar because they have that high pitched nasally sound, but thats not bad because you are perfect for that sort of character. There are TOONNSSS of characters like that so your good to go for that. You have a nice old voice and I thought your jokes were preety funny. Lol, all the pigs are dead. The ending with the mystery gang didnt sound anything like them, but I thought it was still funny. The mixing was great with good background noises and good equalizing. There was some peaking, make sure to pay attention to how loud your crazy voices are. Its hard to sound low when you have such a crazy character to do, so make sure to lower the mic volume a little for the crazy characters. nice Job overall, your a good voice actor with this crazy style you have! Sorry you didnt meet the requirements. :( -81

EDDACHE SAYS:

Diamond-Armada
Out Of Control TV Programmes

Acting = 35
Fit = 23
Originality = 13
Range = 14
Mixing = 10

95

Comments
Comes in short of 2 minutes so not sure this fully qualifies but here goes: Superbly acted. I'm surprised there's a room that can contain you for very long with the amount of bouncing on the walls that you do. It was very well produced with great use of music. My only real negative points were that the TV Shows bit for voice acting is a little overdone and the Scooby-Doo scene was a bit weakly voiced (although Shaggy was excellent). Plus the keyword "muffin" felt a little forced in the end there. Either way, you're clearly a pro!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Will Ryan (diamond-armada):
Out Of Control TV Programmes
Acting 20/35
Fit 14/25
Originality 6/15
Range 5/10
Mixing 6/10

- 53

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Will Ryan (diamond-armada):
Out of control T.V programmes
Acting - 24/35
Fit - 13/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 10/10

- 72

A nice little compilation of random scenes, but lacks holding a plot and something fluent to follow, and to allow the listener to really absorb the characters. Also lacking in diction in some places.

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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[Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)]

Final voice Acting Contest Results! :L

Final Averaged Score From All Judges - 74

The acting was well done, but it didnt sound like they were speaking to eachother because it was a bit monotone. The range was great, because the spanish guy was very well done. THe comic relief guy sounded ridiculous. just as he was supposed to. The chef, however, didnt really match his character. He kept pausing like that guy in star trek lol. It was an original character, I didnt really understand just exactly who he was hehe. I laughed when you kept using the same loop for each character and then immediately switching to another loop that matched the current character talking. Good mixing skills. HOWEVER for some reason each character was either in the right speaker or in the left speaker. This made the listening annoying. You should always make all voices throught the lfet AND right speakers for listening pleasure.

Keep it up, you have great potential! - 74

EDDACHE SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios
Juio's Folly

Acting = 33
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

-96

Comments
This is a peculiar one! The Spanish/Latino voice was fantastic and the doctor's voice was very funny. The comic relief was a bit odd and a little misplaced but overall, this piece was very well done and displayed a good range. Great story, very original and brilliant use of sfx and music with each character having their own theme song. Great work!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios:
Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)
Acting 19/35
Fit 12/25
Originality 9/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 4/10

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STALAGMITE SAYS:

CartoonplanetStudios:
Juio's Folly (cps Va-reel 1)
Acting - 24/35
Fit - 19/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

70

Nice demonstration of your vocal talents! Love all the voices, ESPECIALLY that damn Spanish one! Just WOW!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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[Beta Unit]

Voice Acting Contest Final Results! >:)

IMPORTANT: Disqualified for using Microsoft Sam!

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 30

I couldnt tell if you were being serious or not on this. The acting was very bad. it sounded like you just accidently hit record on your computers recording program while reading the voice acting contest thread. So then you decided to half ass your way through some random skit. You kept breathing into the microphone and pausing for unnecessary amounts of time that completely through my attention off of the story. You used microsoft Sam as the robot, which sounded better than your acting. Sorry to be harsh, its just that you really need to put forth more time and effort in this. Take a deep breath AWAY from the microphone, then say the best line you can for the character you are voicing. For this you rushed every line and it sounded crappy. The doctor was alright, I liked his voice. The german ruler sounded alright, the cyborg sounded horrible. The story was decent, I thought it was interesting that the man was being taken over by some strange experiment. You didn't use muffins in the way i was expecting, you just randomly said it. Thats not very original.

If you want to improve, simply take time away from the microphone to develop your characters. Try saying some random lines to yourself in their voice. Practice practice practice the lines. Then when you think you are ready, go up to the mic, and say the line to the best of your abillity. Make sure to turn your head away from the mic when breathing. Good luck. I hope to see another piece in the next contest. -31

EDDACHE SAYS:

Bou1der
Beta Unit

Acting = 15
Fit = 10
Originality = 9
Range = 5
Mixing = 3

-42

Comments
The acting wasn't great. There were some scenes of drama that could have been done a lot better, such as the "state your directives" scene which just sounded dull, but then other scenes when the main character got angry showed some improvement. The evil scientists voices didn't work very well as I couldn't tell if they were supposed to be comical or serious and the story was quite poor. The use of a machine generated voice was disappointing and possibly against the rules? Regardless, not a great range. The mixing wasn't very good either as there were lots of pauses and moments of silence (i.e. right at the start), some of the sfx were bad and there was a lot of puffing on the microphone proving far too much a distraction. A lot of improvement required but with more practice your skills may improve.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Bou1der:
Beta Unit
Acting 5/35
Fit 10/25
Originality 5/15
Range 3/10
Mixing 0/10

-24

Stop breathing in the mic please.

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Bou1der:
Beta Unit
Acting - 8/35
Fit - 3/25
Originality - 5/15
Range - 3/15
Mixing - 6/10

- 25

I sense a potential talent. Its wasn't very fresh or unique, but it was fairly charming and easy to listen too., but if you wanted a Microsoft sam voice you should have impersonated one.

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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[The Travel to Polaris]

Amazing...

Its raining over a large mountain. Camera zooms over mountains and trees, it is foggy and hard to see. Suddenly a large tribe is shown dancing around a fire in the rain. They dance and clap and chant while drinking and talking. The party ends and they retire back to their homes. It continues raining. In their sleeps, a spaceship arrives and they wake up to see an alien emerge from the spaceship. An overwhelming feeling of terror and amazement washes over their bodies. The alien says for them to come forth, and they do so.

The tribe boards the ship and the ship floats into the air, then flies off into space from where it came. It flies past stars and planets of all sorts of color. Yellow, red, black, blue, green, violet, pink, every color of the spectrum they see mixed in the universe. Finally the ship enters a blackhole and nothing can be heard. Time slows down and the black hole collapses on itself. The ship is in between time and the universe, reality and fiction, in between dimmensions. The tribe gazes out the window in awe as the black space turns to white. They see a large planet, larger than any of the planets or suns that they passed. The spaceship lands on this planet on a large tree in the middle of a city made entirely out of a forest.

They get out and the alien begins to show them all the wonders the aliens have created. Buildings as tall as mountains made out of trees and roots stand before them, reaching towards the skys. Then it all abruptly ends. They got one small glimpse and then a young boy awakes to stare out into the rain outside his hut. He turns over again and falls asleep.

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Nice pads and beat. Very touching. Great job man.

Helth responds:

Hey man thanks for your little story! It was nice man, better than our :D

Glad u liked it dude;)