FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[When a Tear is Shed - F-777]

Yep.

Your officially in front of DJ-Nate. On my book anyway.

Awesome synths. Awesome beats. Awesome trance. Awesome Song.

Great job man. I am using this to play at the rave party I am hosting in a month. So when people say, "Hey! This is an awesome song," I'll say, "Don't thank me thank F-777)

F-777 responds:

Awesome! =D!! Dude thanks so much!!!

[Forever (Extended Mix)]

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WOOOOO. Dude, i am using this one in my next yo-yo competition. Thanks man. It should have been the one you were going to dedicate to me though. :D

Thanks a lot for making an extended version. It will go great with my next Flash game.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/21090 8/71296_particle.php

Do you think so?

Kr1z responds:

HURRAARR for yo-yo!!!!
I'm glad you like it and thanks for using it in flash :)

[Retribution (Mac8)]

Ok.

The very beginning piano sounded very nice with the violins. Of course this has been done before in many other songs, but I am not going to judge the song by originality or some crap like that. I was very surprised to hear the synth and beat come in with the piano. Personally, I didn't think it sounded very good with the piano. But when the lead up came in at 52 seconds, I wanted to get up and start head banging. It was a very strangly mixed song, but the beat mixing was very professional. Although it was professional, it didn't sound very good altogether. I only wanted to headbang for about 5 seconds. The song really dragged on after that. If you were to use a diffferent synth or piano with the beat along with more sounds, it would sound 100% better. Good job altogether and good luck with the contest. Sorry I can't write a 1000 word review like the guys below me, I just don't have anything more on my mind at the moment. Of course I could go into depth with what you could use to make it sound better... but that would take hours and you probably wouldn't bother reading it anyways.

All in all, I recommend changing around the mix and put the same concept of piano and beat in a better organized song.

By the way, in case you were wondering I quit music. Until I find a suitable program that I can master my skills with, I can not continue in Garageband. I might produce a view more songs.. but I can not possibly create a custom beat like you did in this song.

Quarl responds:

Thanks <3

[(:.FattyMcPatty TEST1.:)]

My favorite parady.

Thanks for making an audio after my fattymcpatty series!!!

[Iris]

Weirrdd.

I didnt like the fuzzy noise in the background.. apparently neither does anyone else. It is hip-hopish... but you need to start the song off much faster. When the beat came in.. I was bobbing my head to the best combination if beats I have heard in a lonnnngggg time. And the beat kept getting more complex! Dang man you've got talent.

[Tears Drop[Breakfast Mix Prev]]

WOOT!!

The background noise came in at a good rate. It is a good thing you added a little to the beat, or it would have gotten boring. At 50 seconds you should of inserted a star synth. (something that goes neeeerrrrrrr....... like a star)It needed a little bit more to the song... but other than that i throughly enjoyed this song. Could be heard on a trance radio station! seriously.

[Music Is My Extasy [Remix]]

VERY NICE BEAT!

It is rare to hear such a high quality beat in audio on Ng these days. Greaaatt job. The vocals were freaking sweet as well. You obviously are very professional with this stuff.

Terror-Proof responds:

tbh i think im far from pro lol

[When She Smiles]

Lol newgroundians.

Never heard it used that way before. X D Well anyway.. this song sounded amazing when it began. The pad and piano sounded marvelous and flew through my ears perfectly. Then you brought in the techno. Not a bad thing or anything, but judging from the reviews... the "newgroundians" dont like it when that happens. I don't really know why... but taste has its measures... and it measures poorly most places here. Due to 0 bombers and such.

I loved the way you brought in all those synths and beats. It really brought up the pad to a uplifting level rather than a sad one. Combine all your talents and I am sure you can make a great sounding song.

CaptainWonderpants responds:

Thanks for the 10 :)

I don't know, eh.
My personal "style" (if you can call it that) is trying to mix emotional and meaningful stuff with the carefree style of dance music.

Honestly, this song was more about somebody I know and was only ever supposed to stay on my computer. But hell, I thought I'd upload it anyway.

Thanks very much for the positive review, it makes me feel good when someone listens to my music.

[I Have A Dream]

Whats with these people?

I actually really liked it. It sounded real trancy and the speeches from Luther king went well with it. The beat went well with it to! I don't know what people have against this song.. cause I truly like it brother. keep up the good work!

CaptainWonderpants responds:

Well dude, it's personal taste I suppose.
If a track only appeals to 1 out of 4 people, I'm cool with it :)

Thanks for the review and 10.

[{-^MP^-} Techno Funk! V2]

RAAAVVEEE!!

This is a freaking sweet funk and techno combination you got in this song! Its like.. FUNKNO BABY YEAH! I loved all the background synths and beats! They all went perfect together yo! Duuddee... this song is freaking out there. It really puts me in a trance. The way you filtered the instruments was really professional. Great job man!!

Musical-Pants responds:

Woah thanks!
In your response to my review of your song, you talked about the MAC, well this is my cure for MAC-dom!
(cue cheesy telemarketer voice)
Are you depressed? Need cheering up? Like songs with lots of happy sounds? Boy do we have just the thing!
TEKNOW FUNX!!!
Anyway, i'm glad you liked the song, thanks for the review!

-Pants