FatKidWitAJetPak's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Urban Color]

Jazz baby!

I have listened to this song quite a few times. It sounds so live and professional. The bass in the background is wonderful and every instrument just flows so smoothly together. Its like im drifting away ohhh yeeaahhh. You even put in variation, which is a desperate need for songs. This sounded so live and wonderful, nothing generic at all. The tune was addicting. Made me want more.

Good job!

No1r responds:

Thank you very much for listening and review my work! :)

[Turntable]

Cool!

How did you do this? did you really use a turn table? This would be perfect for a menu loop or something. I might actually use this! Nice, short, and perfect for a flash game. Good job.

ForestLomn responds:

Well thank you! No... i cut up 2 different turn table loops and messed with them a little bit. LOL cant believe people like this. But you can use it if you'd like.

[The Holydays]

Kickass!

I havent heard a song from you in like FOREVER. I remember your futurama one and I still occasionally listen to it on my Itunes. I love the spacey feelings of your song with that nice groove in the background. I did notice some flaws in this, however. For one the background had some minor crackling and went from left to right in my speakers which made it kind of annoying. it gave it TOO much of a spacey feel you know? Try just mastering the volume of everything. I really enjoyed the rest of this song though. Good job and keep up the good work you crazy music man you.

Peptotrippin responds:

Fuckin' A, man. You're right. I was dickin' around and making this through an amp, so I didn't hear any of that. But NOW! Fuck. It'll be JAWSOME without it.

[Fkwajp Anthem Voice Acting]

D

OMFG.

I cried my eyes out. This is the best thing ever. THANKS. :D :D :D :D

Stalagmite responds:

thanks fatty ^^ :D *hands a pie* miss you :D

[Kazmo - The Blue [loop]]

Im In Love

Ive been reviewing your music latley and i have fallen in love with your music. Im glad you are still making it as well. i am planning on putting it in a game I am working on, and I think it might be perfect for it. This is more laid back than most of your songs, but it is very catchy neverless. I can picture this as a menu theme!

Great job and never stop making music.

Kazmo responds:

Heyyy thanks! :D

I actually just updated this, so you should listen again! XD

[(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin]

Final Results From Voice ACting Contest! :X

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 88

Wow. Just like, holy shit. I expected a good submission from you and I see this wasnt a good submission... it was a fantastic submission. Each and every character was acted very very well, and you have about 8 of them. I LOVED the background voices. You are very good with making boy and girl voices. The acting of the main character was hilarious. The hippy cafe goer, terribly awesome. The guys on TV, just fabulous. The jokes, lolable. It wasnt to long and it wasnt to short. The ending could have been a bit less adruptive, but it still was great. You need to go ask people if they need any voice acting because you would be a GREAT addition to the voice acting world. You have loads of talent and this is my favorite submission. Great job, just wow. I expect great things from you. -95

EDDACHE SAYS:

rednikaiaG
va4C 2nd muffin

Acting = 35
Fit = 24
Originality = 15
Range = 15
Mixing = 9

98

Comments
Excellent voice acting. Really superb. The voices fit so well and it's a great display of your range. The sfx were too loud in places which smothered the voices a bit but I loved the use of bg voices during the café scenes, people not involved with the main characters at all but really help populate the scene. The TV section felt a little bit of a cop-out, but what you did with it was really well performed and an original method of using the word, "muffin". It's a double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

rednikaiaG
(gaia) va4C 2nd muffin
Acting 28/35
Fit 20/25
Originality 12/15
Range 8/10
Mixing 9/10

- 77

STALAGMITE SAYS:

Rednikaiag
VA4 second Muffins-
Acting - 30/35
Fit - 21/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 13/15
Mixing - 10/10
84

A pure gold performance with hilarious characters and a VERY convincingly mixed scene! Improvements? MAKE MOAR!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!

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rednikaiaG responds:

FatKid - 95/100:---------->
You will be greatly missed round these here parts, Man. Hey, I FINALLY got noted for making girl AND boy voices! Ha! I know in the first competition, everyone just kept saying, "you DON'T even sound like a guy". *wonders if any of you guys must think I actually have a penis or something, in order to pull that one off* The compliments you left, are just, magnificent. Thanks so much for always being a huge help and being open with your advice. I hope to one day, have as many VA roles as you, yourself have taken part in. You little voice actin' weasel, you! Heh heh heh Oh, not to mention both of our first flashes were for Halloween. Whoopty-Doo! :) Thanks for the prize and putting these together, FK!!

Eddache - 98/100:
Holy Smoked Sausages, EddMan---------->
Coming from YOU, this means more than you'll ever know. I mean a high score is a high score but YOU gave it to me. Thank you Sir, thank you. Now that you and STAG-film are teamed up in projects together, you two are gonna rule the Newgrounds World! Ha! So, if you guys ever need a secretary to keep up with what all regions you dominate already, you KNOW where to find me. :)
I know the sound FX were a bit loud in spots. This was, once again a last minute deadline entry. I'm HORRIBLE at that, being prompt, I mean. *sighs* I've tweaked my mic a bit more now so I SHOULDN'T need a LOT of BG noises anyway, now. I'm hoping anyway. The T.V. section was my favorite part to do. I'm glad you got a kick out of it, Man, honestly. Oh, and that "double-thumbs-up-latte with extra cream" is comin' right up. Do you take soy or milk, Sire?
Congrats on the last go around, Meestah Eddache.
*bows down at your NG greatness*

ForNoReason - 77/100:---------->
You crazy, silly soundboard makin' man, you! Thanks for judging the competition and doing so honestly. I really thought you were gonna enter this time around. Hopefully this won't be the last one. It's always so much fun to hear what everyone comes up with. It's a really unique idea, I think. Well, here's to wishing luck on keeping this thing going. If there's ANYthing I can do to help, don't hesitate to ask me. I mean it, Ok? I'd be honored. Thanks again for judging and bringing so many voices here to NG, that make us all smile! :)

STAG-a-zine rack - 84/100---------->
Do I really even need to put this into words? Don't you know already JUST how much pain, I'm in without you in my ears anymore? *pops my arm to plumpen it up, wanting another shot of your sweet beaver goodness, directly in my veins* Ah dear Gawd, how long HAS it been, eh? You and your busy life. I barely get to see you anymore (unless I'm watching you from underneath your bed, I mean. The view's all skewed from there though.) I miss hearing your voice, tickling my cochlea. How's that famed jungle making bro of your doing? I miss ya. I need ya. I gotta chat wiff ye. I need release. Thank you, inifinitely, Staggy Poo. Your opinion will forever be important to me. You are the most talented man I know. Thanks for sharing your gifts with everyone. Go ahead now, cool down your face with a damp rag. You're blushing from absolute embarassment. I apologize. I ramble. I know. I love you.

.................Take care, be good and compete.period
<3:(Gaia:)

[Jones Family VA Contest Entry]

Final Results for Voice ACting Contest :U

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 71

First off, this is my second favorite so far out of all the entries, and i have seen almost all of them. I thought it was so funny and cute and the way you purposely sounded like a girl trying to sound like a guy narrator made me laugh. They main thing that you need to work on is the acting. I could tell you were having fun with this lol, so you trailed off and kind of lost the acting in teh characters, They sounded more silly and random than good acting characters. but there were tons of very well done lines that got you some major points. Your a good voice actor when it comes to these cute characters, but you should try to get as INTO the character as possible. I liked the range you had, all of them sounded squeaky and cute but you still managed to make them sound different. I LOVED THE STORY!!! Attack by food? BRILLIANT! Its like that powerpuff girls episode haahah. -86

EDDACHE SAYS:

Jessismith
Jones Family

Acting = 30
Fit = 25
Originality = 15
Range = 10
Mixing = 7

- 82

Comments
This was very well acted with lots of very entertaining characters. The narrator's voice was a bit weak, and there seemed to be a bit of a struggle with Butch's voice. However, the overall piece has whole a lot of charm! The music/sfx was a little loud in places, swamping the characters voices and there were a few pauses which slowed the piece done. But it was well acted and I hope to hear more from this super family!

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones Family VA Contest Entry
Acting 18/35
Fit 15/25
Originality 12/15
Range 6/10
Mixing 6/10

- 58

Stephanie Young (Jessismith):
Jones family VA contest entry
Acting - 14/35
Fit - 17/25
Originality - 10/15
Range - 10/15
Mixing - 9/10

- 60

The cutest performance I have ever heard. However some voices seemed a little forced but overall very funny!

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Jessismith responds:

Yay! Thanks fatkid! And thanks to all the rest of you wonderful judges. You rule! :D

[Keepers Of Hell]

Final REsults For Voice Acting Contest! :P

FINAL SCORE AVERAGED FROM ALL JUDGES - 63

Personally, I loved LOVED this. Why? Well, because of the strange mixing that you did where you can barely hear the voices of the characters, and the mix of the strangSo 10 for originallity, but 5 for acting. The guy who woke up didn't sound like he was to freaked out when he said "oh my god". He just said it so forcefully. Plus, the characters talked a bit to dull. They didnt sound like they were really talking, rather that they were being forced to talked by some director. In other words, your forcing your voices to much. Try to think like YOu are the character so that YOU just simple talk like him and like you are really there. the mixing was bad because i couldnt hear the characters to well, make sure to lower the volume on the layer where the music is by about 30%. By the way, that ending where you purposely blew into the microphone and said lalal was just fabulous for the muffin ending. I loved it. -80

EDDACHE SAYS:

Kirbyfemur
Keepers Of Hell

Acting = 15
Fit = 20
Originality = 13
Range = 10
Mixing = 5

63

Comments
The acting was ok, but it was very difficult to understand what the characters were saying. The use of music and sfx was good but at the beginning it was smothering the voices so much it made it even more difficult to hear the characters. I had bit of a hard time understanding what was going on but it was quite an original tale. The voices did fit quite well but it was let down a lot by the lack of clarity.

FORNOREASON SAYS:

Kirbyfemur:
Keepers OF Hell
Acting 21/35
Fit 13/25
Originality 12/15
Range 7/10
Mixing 4/10

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Kirbyfemur:
Keepers of hell
Acting -11/35
Fit - 14/25
Originality - 8/15
Range - 8/15
Mixing - 8/10
A very cute performance with charm and light humour. However, I barely even felt any real emotion or expression...

- 51

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THANKS FOR ENTERING!!!

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Kirbyfemur responds:

I guess next time i'll have to make sure not to record so late at night lol

Thank you for the review, and for letting me enter. =3

[The Travel to Polaris]

Amazing...

Its raining over a large mountain. Camera zooms over mountains and trees, it is foggy and hard to see. Suddenly a large tribe is shown dancing around a fire in the rain. They dance and clap and chant while drinking and talking. The party ends and they retire back to their homes. It continues raining. In their sleeps, a spaceship arrives and they wake up to see an alien emerge from the spaceship. An overwhelming feeling of terror and amazement washes over their bodies. The alien says for them to come forth, and they do so.

The tribe boards the ship and the ship floats into the air, then flies off into space from where it came. It flies past stars and planets of all sorts of color. Yellow, red, black, blue, green, violet, pink, every color of the spectrum they see mixed in the universe. Finally the ship enters a blackhole and nothing can be heard. Time slows down and the black hole collapses on itself. The ship is in between time and the universe, reality and fiction, in between dimmensions. The tribe gazes out the window in awe as the black space turns to white. They see a large planet, larger than any of the planets or suns that they passed. The spaceship lands on this planet on a large tree in the middle of a city made entirely out of a forest.

They get out and the alien begins to show them all the wonders the aliens have created. Buildings as tall as mountains made out of trees and roots stand before them, reaching towards the skys. Then it all abruptly ends. They got one small glimpse and then a young boy awakes to stare out into the rain outside his hut. He turns over again and falls asleep.

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Nice pads and beat. Very touching. Great job man.

Helth responds:

Hey man thanks for your little story! It was nice man, better than our :D

Glad u liked it dude;)